Pretty Crazy

I thought it was great- as always. But your killing me, more than ever I want to know what's going on. The story is enjoyable but it's almost torture that ...

Very interesting. I'm afraid I don't have much to say for this, so the review's gonna be kind of short. Poor kid. What can he possibly do now? Usually in ...

Not exactly what I was expecting. I still really like this though. Yeah, maybe it dragged on a little, but it was okay because of the amount of detail and ...

This has so many possibilities. I can't wait to read on! One little thing though, throughout the entire story, I thought the character was a girl. It wasn't until I ...

Fascinating. I really enjoyed reading this. This may not be extremely original though. We've all seen stories start with the crime hundreds of times. It's effective, and I'm not saying ...

You made me overcook my Kraft Dinner. :( But seriously, I could not stop reading this! Read the whole thing. I love the setting in it and the flow of ...

I think I'm going to like this. Well, I'll definitely read some more of it anyway. You have a really neat idea here. This is very hooking. Once the reader ...

Hello! It is my pleasure to review this. I really liked this. I didn’t know where I was running to, or what I was running from but my head was ...

This is very interesting. Looks like most of the nitpicks are covered. Just thought I'd let you know I think this is really good. Keep writing it and post more ...

I'm guessing there's a reason you made this short. Not much happened but that doesn't matter. I need to get ready for the reporter. Huh? What reporter? Was this mentioned ...

I did. I only wish you'd explain more what's going on. Well, this is a prologue. They're kind of supposed to be mysterious . . . Anyway. Good work. I ...

Interesting. It's all one paragraph. You need to break it up into smaller parts so it's less intimidating to read. The action here was good, but there was no description. ...

I read this before too. It doesn't seem like you changed much. Now whether that's a good or bad thing I don't know. I still liked it. It's very original. ...

You had this in your first post. Mind putting in something new? Thanks. :P PS I love this. Anything with powers or along that line interests me. Post more soon!

I think it's a great idea to learn about your fear. It might even make for a better story that way. I must say it was slightly cliche. Kind of ...